My new family parenting program with 2 seperate but related classes.Will it work?

I'm developing a family program using 2 separate but related family classes; 1. Parenting; and 2. Health and Wellness, (a MLM Co.) both are 1 hr. each. Classes meet once a week for 12 weeks %26amp; with family ';money'; and ';time management'; as important side issue(s) %26amp; topic(s). My business hours are 9am-9pm with 4 / three hr. session blocks of time during the day to accommodate most parents鈥?schedules. I am available 24/7/30 but my work week is Mo., Tu., Wed., %26amp; Thu., only. No classes will be provided by me during the 4th week of the month because of other related business issues that have to be attended to. The cost for both programs is $60.00 per mo. For 1or 2 individuals %26amp; $120.00 per mo. For families, a married couple, ';man %26amp; wife';, + 2 children. An after school ';Fun %26amp; Skills'; program with attached and attending parents is also included from 3-6pm daily. Parenting classes are free to parents who are building their family businesses. Also, once a month local camp outs are included.My new family parenting program with 2 separate but related classes.Will it work?
Will it work?





Probably not if you're writing your own marketing material.





For example, in one line you say ';I am available 24/7/30 ';, but in the very next line go on to say this isn't true at all.





This is one example (there are many in this post) of something in your writing that will make you seem unprofessional, unprepared, and lessen the confidence of potential clients, who will probably decide to go elsewhere.





Take the time to hire someone to help you with your writing and presentation. It will probably cost less than you think, and will certainly pay for itself in terms of increasing client-base.





Remember: With ANY business, image is everything.